The Ten Commands (Slightly different)

[Lykos PackLeader]

When someone translated God into "the King," I realized I could use it and not confuse the people who are the original speakers of this language.

So here goes:

The Ten Commandments
Pernem Dokalah Kyuhinis
The Ten Agreements

Breakdown

I am the Chief you-plural-genetive King
Pernem Koskar gef yaltav sda; ahua fanak deezh sta
Lit: The Leader of you-plural. I-am; so say I-do.
Original: I am the Lord thy God;

You-plural worship-imperative futuretense me only
Yaltoav mintav ah-juarek sadeo deezh styl.
You-all me swear-to only imperative you-all-shall.
Thou shalt have no other gods before Me.

You-plural not insult-imperative King
Yaltoav pernem Koskar soidngek deezh styl.
You-all the King dishonour imperative you-all-shall.
Take not the name of the Lord thy God in vain.

Remember-imperative the holy day
Yaltoav per per yanshanem geras donik deezh syl.
You-plural the days dedicated (to) HolyForce (God) to-do honour =imperative you-shall.
Remember the Sabbath Day; keep it holy.

Admire-imperative you-plural-genitive father and mother
Yaltoav antay merla ah donik deezh styl.
Lit: You-plural your clan to-honour imperative you-shall.
Honour thy mother and thy father.

You-plural not kill-imperative futuretense
Yaltoav tro ergonik nexe deezh troteo styl.
You-plural no to-do murder imperative not you-plural-shall.
Thou shalt not murder/kill.

You-plural not rape-imperative futuretense
Yaltoav antay gesika ah-donik deezh styl.
You-plural your partner to-do-honour-to imperative you-shall.
Thou shalt not covet your neighbor's spouse.

You-plural not steal-imperative futuretense
Yaltoav tro lunatir deez sdyl.
You-plural no thief imperative you-shall-be.
Thou shalt not steal.

You-plural not lie-imperative futuretense
yaltoav tro italser deezh sdyl.
You-plural no liar not you-plural-shall-be.
Thou shalt lie.

You-plural not desire-imperative futuretense
Yaltoav akeras tro kakk deezh troteo styl utif ch-je.
You-plural possessions no to-want imperative not you-plural-shall.
Thou shalt not covet thy neightbor's goods.

Any commentary or corrections may be placed in this thread, I'll be fascinated to see it. If it works, we can change the rules a little.